tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post2809910755623219638..comments2023-09-28T07:00:17.920-07:00Comments on lmswriting: X is for eXitLaurenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15292139796803739003noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post-80346040277386855652012-04-28T20:39:58.037-07:002012-04-28T20:39:58.037-07:00These were great. I'll have to go check out my...These were great. I'll have to go check out my exits and make sure they go "zing" like these.Leslie S. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post-24541157337973943092012-04-28T00:15:45.716-07:002012-04-28T00:15:45.716-07:00P.S. Got a new story up and, hopefully, the last S...P.S. Got a new story up and, hopefully, the last SF tomorrow.Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post-8610342267637885292012-04-28T00:15:23.653-07:002012-04-28T00:15:23.653-07:00If I'm feeling a disconnect with the piece to ...If I'm feeling a disconnect with the piece to begin with, I have trouble with exits. Otherwise, I don't really think about it. I'm so busy visualizing the scene that the exit happens without me knowing it (or I don't show an exit at all but cut the scene before anyone leaves).Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post-42421299007959482082012-04-28T00:11:05.242-07:002012-04-28T00:11:05.242-07:00I'm pretty sure all of my exits are awkward, b...I'm pretty sure all of my exits are awkward, but it's honestly not something I put loads of thought in to - I am learning a lot through the A-Z challenge! :DKyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5901931486606631265.post-14889688243705136842012-04-27T21:02:33.833-07:002012-04-27T21:02:33.833-07:00I wrote an awkward exit in a recent story of mine ...I wrote an awkward exit in a recent story of mine that's making the submission rounds:<br /><br /><i>The net advised immediate retreat while the situation was in his favor. If he'd been able to take his eyes from her while doing so, he might not have shoulder-checked the doorframe on his way out.</i> <br /><br />Awesome idea for an "X" entry! It's one of those things you probably don't think about until you find yourself trying to write one. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.authoralden.com" rel="nofollow">J.W.</a>AuthorAldenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06905712756325750291noreply@blogger.com